Your story is very good. I found a few insignificant typographical errors, spelling errors, one or two verbs in the wrong tense. Not sure about the nocturnal ejaculation, I would have skipped that I guess. Sort of a cosmic entity based on fear of psychological mother-smothering? Shekinah? I liked it.
Thanks. Yeah, I haven't really proofed that one too thoroughly yet. I'm not familiar with this shekinah thing, I'll look it up. I was going more for the succubus angle - you know, Lilith, the Jinniya (female Djinn), Aisha Qadisha - see http://hyperstition.abstractdynamics.org/archives/004336.html
- all sorts of female demons crop up in Middle Easter mythology, apparently. I just thought it added a nicely fucked-up sex-magic slant to it, given the earlier references to Crowley. Cheers for reading though!