Well, I'm...Intrested, It has a chance, I just think it needs a little work. These are just some things i though you guys could improve on. I had a hard time Following it towards the end. The acting was Fine, the script needs a bit of improvement though. I thought the "Clown Flakes gag" was something it could have done without along with Doctor. other than that i wasn't sure about wilbur's character, is the Deep voice internal monolog, or an alternate personality ? He switches a lot and is sort of confusing and is the laugh track in his head or is it an audiance. I thought some of the jokes were funny and I like where you were going with Bruce as the abused butler . Overall it's good, Needs a little work but i think you guys may have something worth while here.
But hey I'm just a critic, Keep doing what ya guys love!
p.s Bruce Green stole the show!